Fishing Luck
November 20, 2007
One Day I was out on a boat fishing with my friends , the sun was shinning and everything was great, I thought it couldn’t get better . But then suddenly my fishing rod got extremely heavy , I actually needed help to handle it. When we finally got it up we saw a big bag , we all wondered what was inside so we opened it. In the bag it was money… a lot of money ! In the beginning I couldn’t believe it , I thought it was a big joke and I did everything to find out if the money was fake or not.
When we came back again from the fishing trip I went home with the money, thinking about what I was going to do with them. SUDDENLY I was standing in front of the Car shop on the corner looking at a very hot BMW M3. I thought to my self WHAT A WONDERFUL DAY ! After buying the car i drove the whole way home , smiling from ear to ear .
It was this night… I heard a Rory bang , I went out to look what it was , and there I saw my new BMW M3 smashed by a bad-ball.

November 20, 2007 at 3:52 pm
Your writing has amazed me Julie. You only had a couple small mistakes in this story. Excellent job and a great imagination. It would be nice to go fishing one day and catch a bag full of money.
- August